I thought your pitch was very impressive. I have noticed that the options available to students in regard to healthier food options is very limited considering the current culinary trends leaning more towards a healthier lifestyle. I know I am definitely one of the students you described earlier, I always struggle with getting hot healthy meals whenever I am around campus. Since I work in the School of Theater and Dance basically all day this means I am either forced to spend money on less healthy options or pre-make a meals at home which might not be as fresh as the options your venue would provide. I would definitely like to see something like this on campus since I know I'm not the only one that struggles with this issue as well.
Hey Brooke, Your elevator pitch was precise and relayed the proper message I think. Crafting the perfect elevator pitch definitely doesn't happen over night so being able to take our first drafts and expand on them in the future will be beneficial. You look the part and speak fluently, but if I had one recommendation, it would be to try to find a way to add a hook to suck the viewer in right away and keep them interested throughout the whole pitch. Overall, nice pitch!
Hey Brooke, Great job on your elevator pitch! You did a very good job composing yourself and getting straight to the point on your pitch. Having healthier options can truly benefit a lot of students, and it is also a realistic idea that can be created. I think if you were able to grab your audience at the beginning and leave them with a more memorable ending, it could also help strengthen your pitch!
Hi Brooke, Amazing job on your elevator pitch! Not only do I love your idea, but your presentation of it was great. You caught the attention of the audience right away and drew them in with your positive attitude and your welcoming body language.
I enjoyed your elevator pitch! You have a great opportunity and it seems that you have a good idea of what and where you want to implement this opportunity. My suggestion for you on the next pitch would be to introduce your self in the beginning. Otherwise I think the pitch was great, you spoke clearly and your pitch seemed well rehearsed.
Brooke,
ReplyDeleteI thought your pitch was very impressive. I have noticed that the options available to students in regard to healthier food options is very limited considering the current culinary trends leaning more towards a healthier lifestyle. I know I am definitely one of the students you described earlier, I always struggle with getting hot healthy meals whenever I am around campus. Since I work in the School of Theater and Dance basically all day this means I am either forced to spend money on less healthy options or pre-make a meals at home which might not be as fresh as the options your venue would provide. I would definitely like to see something like this on campus since I know I'm not the only one that struggles with this issue as well.
Hey Brooke,
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch was precise and relayed the proper message I think. Crafting the perfect elevator pitch definitely doesn't happen over night so being able to take our first drafts and expand on them in the future will be beneficial. You look the part and speak fluently, but if I had one recommendation, it would be to try to find a way to add a hook to suck the viewer in right away and keep them interested throughout the whole pitch. Overall, nice pitch!
Hey Brooke,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your elevator pitch! You did a very good job composing yourself and getting straight to the point on your pitch. Having healthier options can truly benefit a lot of students, and it is also a realistic idea that can be created. I think if you were able to grab your audience at the beginning and leave them with a more memorable ending, it could also help strengthen your pitch!
Hi Brooke,
ReplyDeleteAmazing job on your elevator pitch! Not only do I love your idea, but your presentation of it was great. You caught the attention of the audience right away and drew them in with your positive attitude and your welcoming body language.
Hi Brooke,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your elevator pitch! You have a great opportunity and it seems that you have a good idea of what and where you want to implement this opportunity. My suggestion for you on the next pitch would be to introduce your self in the beginning. Otherwise I think the pitch was great, you spoke clearly and your pitch seemed well rehearsed.